[Short original fic] Night Draws Near
I've shelved this for a couple of days before going back and spotting bits and pieces that need to be changed. Still, I want to post this up in case a few other sets of eyes on it might help spot the...
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Oh wow.I'll be honest, I can't see any 'boo boos', and I dont' think you need another draft.This is good. This is really good.The only thing that occurs to me is maybe a 'With luck.' at the end there,...
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Dang Scott - that's a hell of a story. Well done. I love the part about not being a hero and shooting him in the back. Nice touch.'leta Truth, time obscuresFact decays, but myth edures...-Master...
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